Due to this project being a collaboration, Blythe got the same feedback.
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I’m glad to say the feedback is similar to my previous post. We need to create more final design work. Not only the app, but the whole imagery around it. I’d almost go as far as calling it branding. As an example, the Hailo app: primarily they are an app, but there’s a huge amount of design and imagery built around this app.
I believe that we’ll need to move in this direction, and create similar pieces of design. Carlos Palma did a great job at this, so it’d be great if I could get hold of his work, and showcase how other students have contextualised their work.
[update] I did get hold of Carlos Palma‘ work. Look at how the idea has been put in to context.
